“Do not follow your heart.” says the sane voice in my head before picking up the forbidden fruit of Eden.
“I know your heart desires and I see nothing wrong about them. Follow your desires, Eve. Then, you will never go wrong. ” Said the serpent.
I know it‘s wrong but I want to know why it is forbidden.
I know it‘s not right but I want to follow my heart.
There‘s nothing wrong in following my heart, right?
I reach for the fruit and look how beautiful and stunning it is.
Let me just know how it taste like and will throw this away. I’m sure it’s bitter. I’m guessing ,it will taste odd.
I will ask forgiveness to Father after. He is forgiving and loving Father, He will surely understand. It is just my curiosity.
I made a bite.
It taste good. Oh! Adam will love this too..
How dare He made this lovely fruit be forbidden?
He is selfish!
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Cake is sad but obvious. RIP to the person 🙏
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Where is the pets post? Hahah I’m waiting ..
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Coming up soon 😁
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Okay *big grin*
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Amazing. Yes we should follow our hearts.😊
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Haha loved the twist here.. I read this out loud like a narration just for the fun of it and ended up enjoying it to bits!!! 😄✌
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I imagine you doing it. Hahaha and laughed. Thankyouuuu!
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Haha.. loved it to bits! I even changed voices when I was reading the dialogues 🙈😄
Wish I could read this out loud for my students but that would be kinda unholy 😄
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..and you are a teacher? Well, moon is a teacher too.. 🙂
Hahaha. . keep it low. Haha.. Children might hear you. Haha. -Sun
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I can see how one might feel that way… lol
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*evil grin* I bet what I mean.. Hehe
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I bet you get what i mean *
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Haha! loved the ending 😀
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Hahaha .. Thank you. 🙂 glad you love it.
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Well ✒ penned😊🙂👌👍
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Thanks , Eliza!
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Yr welcome..😄😄😄
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